Assessment and curriculum requirements sometimes flatten the richly connective nature of reading, making it easy for teachers and students alike to gloss over the need for true, authentic, and meaningful interactions with a text. In our classrooms today, how much of what we do helps students make meaningful and personal connections with the text? And how much of what we do allows students to share those ideas with others? Through the use of annotations that tap into the various ways that students can enter into a text, students will begin to make connections with that text, gaining confidence in their ideas and their ability to express ideas in writing.
| From Theory to Practice
|In his English Journal article “I'll Have Mine Annotated, Please: Helping Students Make Connections wtih Text,” Matthew D. Brown expresses a basic truth in English Language Arts instruction: “Reading is one thing, but getting something of value from what we read is another” (73). Brown uses the avenue of personal connection to facilitate the valuable outcomes that can result from reading and interacting with text. He begins with student-centered questions such as, “What were they thinking about as they read? What connections were they making? What questions did they have, and could they find answers to those questions?” (73). Brown’s questions lead to providing students with instruction and opportunities that align with the NCTE Principles of Adolescent Literacy Reform: A Policy Research Brief by “link[ing] their personal experiences and their texts, making connections between the students' existing literacy resources and the ones necessary for various disciplines” (5).
Brown, Matthew D. “I'll Have Mine Annotated, Please: Helping Students Make Connections with Text.” English Journal Vol. 96, No. 4. March 2007: 73–78.
NCTE Principles of Adolescent Literacy Reform: A Policy Research Brief. 2007. NCTE.
- examine and analyze text closely, critically, and carefully
- make personal, meaningful connections with text
- clearly communicate their ideas about a piece of text through writing, revision, and publication
- Find sample annotated texts to share with your students. Shakespeare’s plays work well since many of his texts are annotated. Red Reader editions published by Discovery Teacher have great user-friendly annotations geared toward young adult readers. Look for selections that are engaging—ones that offer more than vocabulary definitions and give a variety of annotations beyond explanation and analysis.
- Alternately, search Google Books for any text with annotations. A search for Romeo and Juliet, for example, will bring up numerous versions that can be viewed directly online.
- While much of the work will be done by students, it is useful to take some time to think about the role of annotations in a text. You will have students identify the functions of annotations, but it is always helpful if you have your own list of uses of annotations so that you can help guide students in this area of instruction if necessary.
- Make copies of all necessary handouts.
- Arrange for students to have access to Internet-connected computers if they will be doing their annotations in an online interactive.
- Test the Literary Graffiti and Webbing Tool interactives on
your computers to familiarize yourself with the tools and ensure that you have
the Flash plug-in installed. You can download the plug-in
from the technical support page.
Instruction and Activities
- Begin the session by asking students if they are familar with the word annotation. Point out the words note and notation as clues to the wordss meaning. If students know the word, proceed with the next step. If students are unfamiliar, ask them to determine what the word means by seeing what the texts you pass out in the next step have in common.
- Pass out a variety of sample texts that use annotations. If you are using Google Books, direct students to texts online to have them examine the annotations that are used.
- Have the students skim the texts and carefully examine the annotations. Encourage students to begin to see the variety of ways that an editor of a text uses annotations.
- Working with a small group of their peers, students should create a list that shows what effective annotations might do.
- Once the small groups have created their lists, share these out in a whole group discussion, creating a list that shows all the ways a reader of a text can annotate that text. This list can be used as a rubric for evaulating/responding to student annotations later in the lesson. Students typically point out how annotations
- give definitions to difficult and unfamiliar words
- give background information, especially explaining customs, traditions, and ways of living that may be unfamiliar to the reader
- help explain what is going on in the text
- make connections to other texts
- point out the use of literary techniques and how they add meaning to the text
- can use humor (or other styles that might be quite different from the main text)
- reveal that the writer of these annotations knows his or her reader well.
- The process of generating this list should move into a discussion about where these annotations came from—who wrote them and why. Guide students to think about the person who wrote these ideas, who looked at the text and did more than just read it, and who made a connection with the text. It is important here that students begin to realize that their understanding of what they have read comes from their interaction with what is on the page. You may wish to jumpstart the conversation by telling students about connections you make with watching films, as students may be more aware of doing so themselves.
- Discuss ways that a text can affect readers and ways these effects can cause readers to connect with texts. Feel free to include visual texts in the conversation. Students begin to talk about how stories that they read can
Point out that these effects are also valid ideas for annotation and add them to the list from earlier in the session.
- touch them emotionally, making them feel happiness as well as sadness
- remind them of childhood experiences
- teach them something new
- change their perspective on an issue
- help them see how they can better relate to others around them
- help them see the world through someone else’s experiences
- Before beginning the next lesson, create your Annotation Guide reflecting the different functions of annotation the class discussed today (or use the Sample Annotation Guide).
- Pass out “Eleven” by Sandra Cisneros or any other text appropriate for your students and this activity.
- Read and discuss the story as needed, but resist spending too much time with the story since the goal of annotation is to get the students to connect with the text in their own ways.
- Pass out the Sample Annotation Guide or the one the class created and review the various ideas that were generated during the previous session, helping students to begin to think of the various ways that they can begin to connect to the story “Eleven.”
- Pass out the Annotation Sheet
and ask the students to choose a particularly memorable section of the story, a section large enough to fill up the lines given to them on the Annotation Sheet. (NOTE: While you could have the students create annotations in the margins of the entire text, isolating a small portion of the text will make the students’ first attempt at annotations less daunting and more manageable. You can also use ReadWriteThink interactives Literary Graffiti or Webbing Tool at this point in the instructional process, replacing or supplementing the Annotation Sheet handout.)
- Share with students the Student Sample Annotations from “Eleven”
and use the opportunity to review the various purposes of annotating and preview directions for the activity.
- Pass out the colored pencils. Make sure that students can each use a variety of colors in their annotating. Sharing pencils among members of a small group works best.
- Have the students find a word, phrase, or sentence on their Annotation Sheet
that is meaningful or significant to them. Have them lightly color over that word, phrase, or sentence with one of their colored pencils.
- Students should then draw a line out toward the margin from what they just highlighted on their Annotation Sheet.
- Now students annotate their selected text. Using the Sample Annotation Guide, students should write an annotation for the highlighted text. They can talk about how they feel or discuss what images come to mind or share experiences that they have had. Any connection with that part of the text should be encouraged at this entry-level stage.
- Repeat this process several times. Encourage students to use a variety of annotations from the Sample Annotation Guide. But, most importantly, encourage them to make as many annotations as possible.
- At this point, make sure that students reflect on this process. Ask them to write briefly in response to these questions:
- What did they get out of writing annotations?
- What did they learn about the text that they didn’t see before?
- How might this make them better readers?
- Students should take the time to share these reflections with each other and with the whole class. Collect responses to evaluate levels of engagement and to find any questions or concerns you may need to address.
- Return annotations from the previous session and address any questions or concerns.
- Explain that, working in pairs, the students will examine each other’s annotations and look for ideas that have the potential for further development and revision.
- Distribute copies the Annotation Peer Review Guide and explain how it will help them work together to select the best ideas that they have presented in their annotations. Peer review partners should label each annotation, comment on it, and look for several annotations that would benefit from revision and continued thinking.
- Have each pair narrow down their ideas to the four or five most significant annotations per student.
- Once this is done, give the students time to start revising and developing their ideas. Encourage them to elaborate on their ideas by explaining connections more fully, doing basic research to answer questions or find necessary information, or providing whatever other development would be appropriate.
- Circulate the room to look at what the students have chosen so that you can guide them with their development and writing. If you see the need to offer more guiding feedback, collecting the annotation revisions during this process may be helpful.
- Once students have revised and developed a few of their annotations on their own, students should begin work toward a final draft.
- Have the students use a peer review process adapted from the work of Joseph Tsujimoto:
- The students exchange their revised annotations.
- They write three comments on the set of annotations in response to the following questions:
- What is one thing that I really liked in this set of annotations?
- What is one thing that I found confusing, needed more explanation, etc.?
- If this were my set of annotations, what is one thing that I would change?
- Encourage students to rely heavily on the Sample Annotation Guide and the Annotation Peer Review Guide
to make these comments during the peer review process. They should be looking to see that there are a variety of annotations and that the annotations dig deeper than just surface comments (e.g., definitions) and move toward meaningful personal connections and even literary analysis.
- This work will have brought a students to the point at which they can create a final draft of their personal responses. Getting students to the point of revision and publication will add another level of authenticity to the student’s work. Sugggested formats for publication include
- As a final step, have the students reflect on the process of creating these annotations.
- What did they learn by doing this activity?
- How did these annotations change their perspective on the text?
- In what ways did their thinking change as they worked through the drafting, rewriting, and revising of their annotations?
- Make sure that students are given time to share these reflections with each other and with the whole class.
- Once students are comfortable with annotating small sections of text, there are a number of ways that annotations can be used in the classroom. They could, for example:
- annotate a whole text, using the margins for annotating
- use sticky notes in textbooks or novels as a way to annotate larger works
- use annotations as part of a formal essay to provide personal comments to supplement the analysis they have written.
- The following ReadWriteThink lessons could also be used as extensions based on the ways that they ask students to connect with text:
- PowerPoint in the Classroom
- Here you’ll find online tutorials for adding images, sound, and more to PowerPoint presentations.
Insert a Footnote or Endnote
- This Microsoft resource shows how to use footnoting tools in Word.
- Review and comment on student reflections after each step of the annotation drafting and revision process.
- If you use this lesson as an introduction to the idea of annotation, the focus of the assessment should be on the variety of annotations a student makes. Even so, teachers should be able to observe if students were able to move beyond surface connections (defining words, summarizing the story, and so forth) to deeper connections with the text (personal feelings, relating evens to past experiences, and so forth). Use an adaptation of the Annotation Peer Review Guide
in this process.
- For those who take this lesson to its completion by having students generate a final published draft, the focus should move from just looking for a variety of annotations to focusing on the quality of the annotations. By working through the writing process with these annotations, students should have been able to comment meaningfully beyond what they began with in their “rough draft.” This should be most evident in the reflections students write in response to the process of creating annotations. Again, a modified version of the Annotation Peer Review Guide
would be suitable for this evaluative purpose.
1 - Students read a wide range of print and nonprint texts to build an understanding of texts, of themselves, and of the cultures of the United States and the world; to acquire new information; to respond to the needs and demands of society and the workplace; and for personal fulfillment. Among these texts are fiction and nonfiction, classic and contemporary works.
2 - Students read a wide range of literature from many periods in many genres to build an understanding of the many dimensions (e.g., philosophical, ethical, aesthetic) of human experience.
3 - Students apply a wide range of strategies to comprehend, interpret, evaluate, and appreciate texts. They draw on their prior experience, their interactions with other readers and writers, their knowledge of word meaning and of other texts, their word identification strategies, and their understanding of textual features (e.g., sound-letter correspondence, sentence structure, context, graphics).
4 - Students adjust their use of spoken, written, and visual language (e.g., conventions, style, vocabulary) to communicate effectively with a variety of audiences and for different purposes.
5 - Students employ a wide range of strategies as they write and use different writing process elements appropriately to communicate with different audiences for a variety of purposes.
6 - Students apply knowledge of language structure, language conventions (e.g., spelling and punctuation), media techniques, figurative language, and genre to create, critique, and discuss print and nonprint texts.
7 - Students conduct research on issues and interests by generating ideas and questions, and by posing problems. They gather, evaluate, and synthesize data from a variety of sources (e.g., print and nonprint texts, artifacts, people) to communicate their discoveries in ways that suit their purpose and audience.